三、组织结构（满分4）

　　内容充实，上下文连贯，用语规范，表达准确，无语法错误；词汇和句型句式运用恰当，多见好句型和习惯表达用语者，可给3-4分。

　　内容充实，不写废话，上下文连贯，用语规范，表达准确，无或少见语法错误；词汇和句型句式运用恰当，多见好句型和习惯表达用语者，可给2分。

　　一般情况下，内容和语言累计得分在15分以上者（含），方可得到1-2分组织结构分。

　　内容和语言在15分以下者，如文中有值得肯定的好的句型和表达，可酌情考虑给1分组织结构分。

　　通篇句型句式单一、词汇贫乏者，即使无语法错误，一般也不予给组织结构分。

　　一、活动介绍类

　　首段：

　　(1) I’m pleased to know that you’re greatly interested in ... , so I’d like to share a piece of good news that there will be a ... Now, let me offer you some useful information.

　　(2) It’s my great honor to invite you to enter a ... Now, let me offer you some useful information about it.

　　(3) It’s time for us to say goodbye to our school life soon.Surprisingly, there is a / an ... prepared for us. Now, let me offer you some information about it.

　　主体段：

　　1. 时间&地点：The ... will be held in Classroom 302 at 3 o’clock in the afternoon on June 8th, 2019.

　　2. 内容：

　　(1) 主题句：There will be various meaningful activities included in it.

　　(2) 要点：First of all，You will be invited to ... / You will be given a chance to ... which will ...

　　After that, It will be more than interesting for you to ... / It will impress you a lot to ... so that ...

　　At last, doing sth, will play an important part in ... So ...

　　尾段：

　　That’s all. I firmly believe that if you join in it, you will ...

　　That’s all. I sincerely hope that you can come and share the happiness / fun with us.

　　二、写人叙事类

　　首段：

　　(1) 朋友：A friend in need is a friend indeed. I have a friend just like that who often offers me much warmth in my life. Let me introduce him to you.

　　(2) 父母：If you ask me who is the most important one to me, without doubt, the answer is my ... Let me introduce him to you.

　　(3) 老师：In both my life and study, my ... teacher is special to me because he is not only my teacher but also my friend who has made a great difference to my character.

　　主体段：

　　(1) 外貌：... is very beautiful but a little fat with long hair and big eyes.

　　(2) 性格：... is an outgoing woman who always gets along well with people around her. / ... is very kind to others and easy to get on with. / is so ready to help others that we all like to make friends with him.

　　(3) 爱好：She is especially good at cooking and often cooks different delicious foods for me.

　　4. 事例：

　　(1) Linda is like an angel. Whenever I meet trouble, she will always be there. When I fail my test, She always encourages me to face the fact bravely and then tries to help me to check the reason why I fail. At the same time, she shares her good ways of studying with me.

　　(2) My Chinese teacher, Ms Li, not only teaches us how to learn, but also teaches us how to be a person. I remember I made a serious mistakes in Grade seven, that was to copy others’ homework. Ms Li knew that. Instead of being angry with me, she told me the importance of study and encouraged me to study hard to become a talented person in the future.

　　(3) Last term, I failed my exam. I was so that that I cried sadly in my room. When my mother came from work late, she talked with me patiently and cheered me up. That evening, when I woke up at night, my mother was still working. I was deeply moved. Then I made up my mind to study harder than before.

　　尾段：

　　As a sunshine teenager, Xiao Hui is a good example for us to learn from. / I will treasure the friendship forever.

　　Now I understand my father’s love to me. I will never forget what my father did for me and try my best to make him pleased.

　　He is an excellent teacher I will never forget and love him forever.