范文2

　　Dear Bob,

　　Yesterday I heard from you. I am very glad to be your pen friend. My name is Peter Zhang. I am sixteen years old. I live in…

　　I am a middle school student, too. I like English and maths very much. I also like sports. I am good at singing. I know a little about America. Could you tell me something more about your country in your next letter?

　　Please write to me soon.

　　Yours

　　Peter Zhang

　　点评：回信语言简洁，明了，句子间的衔接自然，紧凑，文中作者把自己的情况大致向美国朋友作了介绍，达到了写回信的目的。

　　假如你陪你校的外籍教师Smith先生去音乐厅听音乐，在门口的布告栏里看见一张观众须知，内容如下：

　　观众须知

　　1.一人一票，凭票入场;

　　2.场内严禁吸烟;

　　3.食品和饮料请勿带进场内;

　　4.演出时请勿照相;

　　5.演出时请勿使用传呼机和移动电话;

　　6.提前30分钟入场。

　　Smith先生不懂中文，他很想知道布告栏里写着什么。现在，请你把观众须知的内容用英语告诉Smith先生，并把要讲的话写下来。

　　范文3

　　Mr. Smith, it is a notice to the audience. It says that we should enter the concert hall 30 minutes earlier before the concert starts. Entrance to the hall is by ticket only, each one each ticket. As a rule, food or drink should not be taken into the hall. Of course, smoking is not allowed in the hall either. Please don't bring your digital camera with you because no photos can be taken during the concert. And what is more, beepers and mobile phones must be off during the concert.

　　点评：文章的用词和句式有一定的难度，特别是关联词的运用，如of course, as a rule, and what is more使文章读起来朗朗上口，层层紧扣，环环递进，体现了作者较高的写作技巧和水平。

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