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　　随着通信技术的发展，手机愈来愈普及了。同学们几乎人人都有手机。上周你们班就学生是否应该带手机入学校进行了专题讨论。同学们对此各抒己见。请谈谈你的看法。

　　要求包括以下内容：

　　1) 赞同和不赞同的理由;

　　2) 你个人观点。

　　注意：

　　1. 词数100左右;

　　2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯的。

　　这篇作文最大的问题就是审题，有的同学上来就写自己的观点，接着写自己赞同或不赞同的理由，以至于导致走题扣分。那么正确的写法应该是怎样的呢?

　　第一段应该陈述背景，即利用题目中所给信息“随着通信技术...各抒己见”，不必全译，交代清楚即可。第二段写两方观点以及理由;第三段写个人观点并结尾。

　　下面这篇范文，快来学习一下吧(加粗部分为亮点)~

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　　With the development of communication technology, cellphones are becoming more and more popular. They have almost become part of our life.

　　Last week we held a discussion about whether cellphones should be allowed at school. Opinions are divided(意见不一). Some think it is convenient to get in touch with others in time of emergency. Besides, they can download music and surf the Internet for information. However, others argue that(引出反方观点时常用) cellphones are not a must in school but a distraction(分心) if used improperly(假如使用不当). Worse still(=What's worse), some even use them to cheat in exams.

　　Personally (引出个人观点), cellphones are useful in our daily life. But it doesn’t mean we can use them freely in school. Why not allow the students to use them at designed time and places?