新东方网>英语>英语学习>英语写作>中小学英语作文>正文

初中英语满分作文:全国各地中考英语优秀作文范文

2019-02-26 13:57

来源:新东方网整理

作者:

  书面表达(满分 15 分)

  “建设美丽新疆,共圆祖国梦想”,所有新疆人正以此为目标全力以赴建设大美新疆。作为生于新疆、长于新疆的中学生,我们又能为此做些什么呢?请从以下提示中选择至少 2 点, 写一篇题为“What can we do to help build Xinjiang?”的英语短文,可适当发挥。

  1. 出行方式;2. 环境保护;3. 节约意识;4. 与人相处。要求:

  1. 80 词左右;

  2. 文章中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;

  3. 语法正确,语义连贯;字迹工整,书写规范。

  One possible version:

  What can we do to help build Xinjiang

  As is known to us all, people are doing their best to make Xinjiang stronger and more beautiful. As students born and grown up in Xinjiang, what can we do to help build it?

  Firstly, we can avoid the traffic jams and reduce air pollution by riding bikes or walking if we don’t live far from our school. Secondly, we shouldn’t spit or litter here and there. In order to protect the environment, we can also plant trees around our city. Thirdly, we are supposed to stop wasting resources. In our daily life, we should save water, electricity and paper and so on. For example, remember to turn off the tap and reuse water. Last but not least, it’s important and necessary to get along well with others. When people are in trouble, we had better give them a hand and try to help them out.

  In short, if everyone including us students makes contributions, our hometown will be better and better.

  Let’s take action now to do what we can to help build Xinjiang.

  附评分标准 一、评分则

  1. 本题总分为 15 分,按 5 个档次给分。

  2. 先根据短文的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量,确定或调整档次, 然后给分。

  二、各档次给分范围和要求:

  第一档(14-15 分)能按要求写出要点;语言无误,行文流畅、语句通顺,表达清楚。

  第二档(10-13 分)能按要求写出基本要点;语言有少量错误,行文基本连贯,表达基本清楚。第三档(7-9 分)能按要求写出基本要点,语言有较多错误,尚能达意。

  第四档(2-6 分)能写出部分要点,语言错误多,影响意思表达。第五档(0-1 分)白卷,或文不对题,错误百出,不知所云。

版权及免责声明

凡本网注明"稿件来源:新东方"的所有文字、图片和音视频稿件,版权均属新东方教育科技集团(含本网和新东方网) 所有,任何媒体、网站或个人未经本网协议授权不得转载、链接、转贴或以其他任何方式复制、发表。已经本网协议授权的媒体、网站,在下载使用时必须注明"稿件来源:新东方",违者本网将依法追究法律责任。

本网未注明"稿件来源:新东方"的文/图等稿件均为转载稿,本网转载仅基于传递更多信息之目的,并不意味着赞同转载稿的观点或证实其内容的真实性。如其他媒体、网站或个人从本网下载使用,必须保留本网注明的"稿件来源",并自负版权等法律责任。如擅自篡改为"稿件来源:新东方",本网将依法追究法律责任。

如本网转载稿涉及版权等问题,请作者见稿后在两周内速来电与新东方网联系,电话:010-60908555。

热搜关键词